Rough cut feedback

*no lip syncing
*no real variation in shots
*shots too long
*start is too slow
*Good use of camera angles
*Some shots too long
*Good idea could be developed
*Editing is confusing
*Random black and white shot
*Unclear Narrative
*Performance good
*Introduction sets the scene in an interesting way
*Needs to be more upbeat
*No relation to music
*Clothes of girl changing good


People in our class gave comments and suggestions about our music video.
Many people mentioned that we didn't involve lip syncing which is true as this is the introduction and start of the narrative. We are later going to involve the band playing and the rest of the narrative.the shots in the rough cut are much slower than we intended, making the video lose its fast pace feel, in the real video the shots will be made a lot faster to ensure the video is suited to its genre. We also intend on shortening the footage so it will be more pacey and interesting to watch.